When I think of the word "peek", I instantly think of a scene where two people are role playing and one is hiding and peeking out from behind a huge draped curtain or peeking out from behind a door.
However you use it in your writing it can add a sensual feel to your story just by corporating it.
One way it's sure to please your readers is using it in a scene that's adult oriented. Having a scene where two consenting adults are showing a playful and loving side is a good way to incorporate the word "peek." You can definitely get very descriptive in how you describe the sensual playful behavior of the two characters in the scene.
As you get descriptive, remember to take the word to the next level by describing dramatic sounds, like soft running or how sexy feet sound hitting a cold hard wood floor as one character is looking for the other in a playful manner. Meanwhile describe just how the other character is "peeking." Meaning, how hard their heart is beating, if they are sweating, or if they are tickled or laughing inside while they are peeking from behind that huge draped curtain.
Remember; don't be afraid to use words such as "peek" to amp up your dramatic and sexy scenes or your scenes of action or horror. Peek adds flair, possibility and adventure to your story. It can be the defining moment of your story.
Cherries And Strawberries
*Literary Spice That's Oh So Nice*
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